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ink…使敘述條理,層次分明,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks._______________________________________All the best!Betty【答案】Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paperwaste less.However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading ebooks does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people39。s body./ I think that ebooks are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now. 【答案】Our school life in Grade NineIt is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us.As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can39。點(diǎn)睛:書(shū)面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。但中學(xué)生在學(xué)校是否應(yīng)該持有手機(jī),一些學(xué)生和老師有不同的觀點(diǎn)。t control themselves and often play games. What39。如but, so, then等。It is+形容詞 for sb to do sth做某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)是…的。作文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),也不必抄寫(xiě)在答題卡上。通過(guò)分析可知,這篇短文應(yīng)使用第一人稱(chēng)I來(lái)敘述,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。點(diǎn)睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng),文章以第一人稱(chēng)、一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式準(zhǔn)發(fā),語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,符合英語(yǔ)句子的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。請(qǐng)以My Unforgettable Middle School Life為題,根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖,寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對(duì)未來(lái)的期盼。語(yǔ)言連貫、通順。寫(xiě)作中注意連詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用,使文意連接緊密,還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系,最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。你打算邀請(qǐng)外教 Peter參加。d better wear a pair of fortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I39。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確,語(yǔ)意連貫,表達(dá)清楚,具有邏輯性。m looking forward to…。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿,談?wù)勆钪心阍撛趺醋?,以及這樣做的意義。句型:By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful;we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。t adjust to the weather and life ,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as a result,my English improved a ,I made friends with some of my are still keeping in touch by letter now.In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.【解析】寫(xiě)作分析:這是一篇給定標(biāo)題的材料作文,需要逐條完成要點(diǎn)問(wèn)題的回答,描述一次自己讓別人開(kāi)心快樂(lè)的經(jīng)歷,是一篇記敘文,首先要讀懂5個(gè)問(wèn)題,其次要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言和銜接手段把這五個(gè)問(wèn)題的回答聯(lián)系在一起,變成一篇短文,同時(shí)也要注意在描述過(guò)去的故事的時(shí)候要正確運(yùn)用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。10.現(xiàn)在智能手機(jī)(smartphone)越來(lái)越普及,很多中學(xué)生都有智能手機(jī)。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。