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experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,向來(lái)自不同國(guó)家的同學(xué)介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用,比如:I39。、校名等相關(guān)信息。2.假定你是David,來(lái)自美國(guó),你的好友Li Ming想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者,他來(lái)信向你了解有關(guān)這方面的情況。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do parttime jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o39。take a parttime jobat 5 o’clock請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹大家的想法并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為初中生應(yīng)該在5點(diǎn)左右放學(xué),下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。at 4:45do what we want, such as listening to musicclock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 39。clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化;同時(shí)Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使敘述條理,層次分明,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)?;貜?fù)信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾己經(jīng)寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer yourquestions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matches. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on.It’s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can’t balance my study and work. If your parents don’t allow you to volunteer, you should have a good talk with them. Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,給好友Li Ming回信,介紹暑假做志愿者的情況。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。3.書(shū)面表達(dá)李華所在的國(guó)際學(xué)校正在開(kāi)展“My Favourite Traditional Festival”交流活動(dòng),假定你是李華,請(qǐng)你向來(lái)自不同國(guó)家的同學(xué)介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié),內(nèi)容包括:1. 今年慶祝時(shí)間(6月18日)2. 節(jié)日由來(lái):紀(jì)念(be in memory of)屈原3. 吃粽子,賽龍舟,掛菖蒲和艾草(calamus and Ay Tsao)……4. 歡迎大家一起體驗(yàn)這個(gè)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日注意:1. 詞數(shù)80~100;,以使行文連貫;;,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。4. 假如你是李華, 你的美國(guó)筆友Bill給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件, 想了解你的夢(mèng)想職業(yè)。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過(guò)描寫(xiě)夢(mèng)想中的職業(yè),讓學(xué)生對(duì)未來(lái)有憧憬,給一部分提示詞,讓學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)。最后向Bill提出問(wèn)題,結(jié)束全文。個(gè)好處)Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?wù)。今年,學(xué)校授予了他優(yōu)秀學(xué)生獎(jiǎng)(Award for Best Student)Problems面臨考試,遭受壓力痛苦,他沒(méi)有充足的睡眠.Your suggestions(根據(jù)實(shí)際情況提表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多,寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意表達(dá)的條理性。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。短文注意到了長(zhǎng)短句的結(jié)合,并恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞,使文章表達(dá)的連貫。3. 語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,短文連貫通順,80詞左右。在描述得到的經(jīng)歷的時(shí)候不落俗套,講到了自己的家庭那時(shí)比較困難,父親是通過(guò)努力工作為我賺錢(qián)買(mǎi)槍的,寫(xiě)作是富有感情的,也通過(guò)這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。某網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化”為題征文,請(qǐng)你用英文寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道,介紹你校上周舉辦的“講中國(guó)成語(yǔ)故事”活動(dòng)并談?wù)勀愕氖斋@與感受。:短語(yǔ):in order to,take part in,lots of,learn from,in the process of,What’s more,have a good time。請(qǐng)根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息,將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。中考后暑假即將開(kāi)始,你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國(guó)旅行。在寫(xiě)作時(shí),注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出?!皰哐C(jī)式父母”的特征是不惜一切代價(jià)為孩子掃除他們生活中遇到的一切障礙,解決一切困難,以便他們可以輕松擁有成功的人生。自己的看法自己的看法要求:詞數(shù):6080詞。t understand the snowplow these parents,they control clean all the obstacles in children39。: 本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第三人稱,輔以第一人稱。句型:高分句型一:Inchildrenlife高分句型二:they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.陷入麻煩,這句話意為:當(dāng)他們陷入麻煩時(shí)他們知道他們需要他們自己盡力去解決問(wèn)題。同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)努力學(xué)習(xí)尊重父母服務(wù)社會(huì)計(jì)劃未來(lái)……(至少兩條)注意:(1)短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);(2)你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條;(3)詞數(shù):80—100;(4)短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn):短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式,如:do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查;respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母;look after照顧;make a good plan for sth為某事做一個(gè)好的計(jì)劃;make some good friends交一些好朋友;keep healthy保持健