【正文】 est in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇提綱話題作文。3．人們對于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的變化。內(nèi)容包括如下：1. 你的壓歲錢的來源和用途；2. 對合理使用壓歲錢的建議（至少 3 點）；3. 呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢，把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、最有意義的地方。2．書面表達根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作，因為可以把自己的知識分享給孩子們，并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。To: lihua china. From: bill006 america. Subject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?◆What is your dream job?◆ Why do you like the job?◆ Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?◆ What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求:1. 參考提示語, 可適當發(fā)揮；2. 語句通順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；: 不少于70詞（開頭已給出, 但不計入總詞數(shù)）。請認真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和你的實際情況給他寫封回信?！驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師?！军c睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ，運用多種連接詞，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強，長短句結(jié)合，讀起來朗朗上口，不失為一篇佳作。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？請結(jié)合自己的實際寫一篇文章，詞數(shù) 80 詞以上，文中不能出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細，寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達出來，不能逐字翻譯?！军c睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右，短文的開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。注意文體、人稱和時態(tài)。注意過渡性語言的使用。提示：1）What’s the benefit （好處） of outdoor activities? （12 opinions）2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （12 examples）3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練、要點齊全。在你班的主題班會上，同學(xué)們進行了“Is daily homework necessary？”的討論，請你根據(jù)提示和要求，并結(jié)合自己的實際經(jīng)驗，發(fā)表你的觀點。m glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。首先需要陳述正反兩方面的觀點，其次結(jié)合自己的實際經(jīng)驗，發(fā)表自己的觀點。恰當?shù)闹V語也為文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個諺語。3. 語言表達準確，短文連貫通順，80詞左右。在描述得到的經(jīng)歷的時候不落俗套，講到了自己的家庭那時比較困難，父親是通過努力工作為我賺錢買槍的，寫作是富有感情的，也通過這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。注意:。、校名等相關(guān)信息。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點齊全，語言簡練。假如你是李華，請你為?？⒄Z園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?，分享一次使你更加自信的?jīng)歷，并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕?。語言力求準確，簡潔。你打算邀請外教 Peter參加。d better wear a pair of fortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I39。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，語言準確，語意連貫，表達清楚，具有邏輯性。m looking forward to…。t adjust to the weather and life ,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as a result,my English improved a ,I made friends with some of my are still keeping in touch by letter now.In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.【解析】寫作分析：這是一篇給定標題的材料作文，需要逐條完成要點問題的回答，描述一次自己讓別人開心快樂的經(jīng)歷，是一篇記敘文，首先要讀懂5個問題，其次要用恰當?shù)恼Z言和銜接手段把這五個問題的回答聯(lián)系在一起，變成一篇短文，同時也要注意在描述過去的故事的時候要正確運用過去時態(tài)。