【正文】 it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，給好友Li Ming回信，介紹暑假做志愿者的情況。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。2．書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你是某英文報紙“Teenagers”欄目的編輯Betty，日前收到了Lucy的來信。s body.In my opinion, Ebook cannot take the place of traditional book, but it39。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。3． 寫作假定你是李華，在一位名叫Tiger Mom的學(xué)生家長的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。3. 提出至少2條建議。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。此處turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。2. 詞數(shù)90左右。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it39。s all. Thank you.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it39。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。 觀點理由一些學(xué)生贊成擁有方便與家長聯(lián)系；一些老師反對擁有有學(xué)生用手機(jī)玩游戲；有學(xué)生用手機(jī)作弊；你的觀點1. 2.要求：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；`2. 必須包含表格所給的提示信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)：80100詞左右（征文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。 eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏?！军c睛】高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我認(rèn)為正確的方式使用手機(jī)對學(xué)生是有幫助的。請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和你的實際情況給他寫封回信?！驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師?！军c睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ，運用多種連接詞，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng)，長短句結(jié)合，讀起來朗朗上口，不失為一篇佳作。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？請結(jié)合自己的實際寫一篇文章，詞數(shù) 80 詞以上，文中不能出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細(xì)，寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，不能逐字翻譯?！军c睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to bee better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題，結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述自己難忘的中學(xué)生活。文中 not only …but also…，help a lot，share happiness and sadness，do well in，give up, besides，so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，therefore, be proud of等詞（組）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表達(dá)了自己愿望與想法，使文章增色不少，值得學(xué)習(xí)。短詩如下：My English Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of why.We all respect and admire her. 注意事項：，不得抄寫短詩原文：、意思連貫、符合情境。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。 提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動物，可以活到80歲。倡議書的結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。s contribution （貢獻(xiàn)） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書,倡議大家保護(hù)大象。寫作時注意不要使用太復(fù)雜的句型，以免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，為使句子具有連貫性，可以適當(dāng)使