【正文】 se I think those who lie and cheat will never_________ out for out of rid of away with Mark seems very knowledgeable and experienced for his age________ an old head on young huge fire broke out in that supermarket the bodies were burned __________, DNA technology would be used for identification of those dead, said reach recognition repair description teacher was making every effort to clarify ___________ the students.(confuse)這個老師正全力詮釋證學生困惑的地方。練好字才是硬道理，請同學們務必購買英語字帖，每天或每周抽一定的時間，照字貼一筆一畫練，認認真真練，扎扎實實練。⑦卷面不整潔，隨意涂改，字跡潦草，寫字太輕，掃描到網(wǎng)上非常模糊，閱卷老師辨認不清等等情況，考生有種種原因?qū)е乱陨锨闆r的發(fā)生，但只會有一種結(jié)果，那就是得分較底，二檔三檔閱卷老師隨意給個分。７號作品中，第三段：Based on what I have mentioned above, having a goal can’t be emphasized too ’m firmly convinced that equipped with a goal, we are bound to embrace a promising 。６號作品中，第三段：As has been illustrated above, a goal is like a lantern that lights the future is the goal that paves the way for the future and lays a good foundation on which we can build the house of 。５號作品中，第三段：We can learn from my experience that only when we have a goal can we embrace a bright 。Can’t attach too much significance to和祈使句的使用，使聊聊數(shù)語平添了幾分語勢。末段剖析：第三段的作用是，照應第一段，結(jié)束議論，升華主題。14號作品中，第二段首句：The memory never fades in my mind when it es to 。５號作品中，第二段首句：When it es to this, I can’t help recalling one of my own was a time when很值得模仿。觀察上文，我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，考生很善于使用較高級的詞語。高級詞語withstanding 和weaken his resolve的恰當使用，無不彰顯了考生深厚的語言功底。Bomb an exam相當于fail an exam是很地道的英語。樣卷中，第二段：Let me take Yu Minhong’s experience as an example to illustrate my had been hoping to enter the Peking University for a long time, but bombed on his first as he was, he didn’t give up his the whole next year, he studied more industriously than ever , he failed withstanding, he was so determined that nothing could weaken his tried even harder and ultimately achieved his was the goal that encouraged him to get over all the obstacles and harvest his final ，９７詞。慚愧之余，我們要面對現(xiàn)實，趕快行動起來，背誦、模仿，在我們的下一次作文中，能見到正確、得體使用這些高級詞語和復雜句式。１２號作品中，開頭語：As a saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Our life way is actually determined by our inner ambitions, which allows you to excavate your superiority in every aspect you like and paveds the way for your success.（正如諺語所說：有競者，事竟成。過去我們僅僅提倡學生們在作文使用“完成句子”中學到語法和詞匯知識，現(xiàn)在我們給你指明一條更為捷徑的方法，還等什么，快熟記吧，用在下一次的作文中。第一段剖析：象樣卷中，開頭語：There is a consensus among people that a goal is what it takes to obtain personal goal is to individuals what a pass is to a travelling ship, under whose guidance we can find the right way to ，There is a consensus among people that（人們一致認為），A is to B what C is to D(Ａ對于Ｂ如同Ｃ對于Ｄ)兩句都為復合句，含有同位語從句、表語從句、定語從句，起到了點題，解釋題義的作用。近幾年湖北省高考作文的特點是：開放性作文，盡管要求文體不限，但仍然是以記敘為主，夾有議論。記敘一般要遵循記敘文敘事的基本程序：發(fā)生、發(fā)展、高潮和結(jié)局。大多數(shù)同學是靠高三嚴格的訓練，無外乎在三個方面：內(nèi)容、語言和書寫，下面從這三個方面來分析這１６篇作文。第一篇：英語作文說句心里話英語作文:說句心里話第二節(jié)：短文寫作（共1題；滿分30分）“Beijing plans to reduce the English section of National College Entrance Examination, the Gaokao, from 150 points to 100 points by 2016.” 請依據(jù)上面這則新聞，結(jié)合實際，用英語寫一篇短文，談談你對英語學習的認識，并簡單陳述你的理由。三檔作文（１３－１８分）所占比例很大，但也不乏２０分甚至２４分以上的作文，下面選?。保镀獌?yōu)秀作文供同學們欣賞、背誦、模仿，除個別少數(shù)的同學具有英語語言天賦，既能從作文范文中吸收高分作文的應具備的要素，又能從閱讀短文中模仿、借鑒優(yōu)秀作文應具備的語言的地道性和鮮明的個性。第一段直入主題，用一句長句，或兩三句點題，解釋題義，即解題；第二段例舉事例，用事例闡明主題，這一段是記敘，也是閱卷老師評判的重點，想得高分的同學們一定要重視這一段的描述、記敘。⑤復雜句式： （and, but ,so, not onlybut also）：２號中，I was not as hard as before, and my grades became behind others’.Generally speaking, a goal is important for us, and every one of us need to set a goal for themselves to guide them in the right ，Set a goal, work hard and you’ll ，As a consequence, not only did Nick make his own career take off, but also he spread the great spirit to those in need, gaining people’s ，Without a goal, never will we succeed in the petitive society, nor will we have enough motivations to make our dreams e （主語從句、賓語從語、表語從句、同位語從句）１號作品中，What we can learn from the experience is that a goal prevents us from being at a loss and being washed away by the flood of the ，All of us held a view that he wouldn’t be admitted to an excellent university, whatever great efforts he ，There was no doubt that my study got worse and ，There is no denying that he achieved a lot, enjoyed much glory and won much （定語從句、狀語從句）