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et the pictureIt seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of…The picture indicates that we…Nowadays, it is a mon phenomenon that…This is a satirical (諷刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of mon phenomenon among…Part 3 thanks to. 表示時(shí)間、順序關(guān)系 first, second …, then, next, finally, for one thing ... for another, in the end, 表示遞進(jìn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)關(guān)系 in conclusion2. To use plicated structures 大忌!2) 企圖幽默 4)中心不明 ?。蹍⒖挤段模荨 he two pictures look so similar at one glance, but they are totally different. In the first picture, a peasant boy, carrying a heavy bundle of rice straw is out of breath under the great pressure. His hope is to have a school to attend. In the second picture, a student is on his way home from school, a heavy bag of books on his back. What he wishes is that he didn’t have to go to school any more. How can the two boys at the same age have such different ideas about attending school? The two pictures show some problems in the present education system in China. In the poor countryside, especially in some western parts o