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ctify. In addition, there is no evidence that the death penalty has the effect of reducing crime, which is surely the aim of punishment. 總論點+否則 Some people think that, as scientists contribute more to the development of our society than other people, science students get more financial support from the government than other students get. Do you agree or disagree? In sum, the needs of science and arts students for higher education should be duly and equally addressed by the government. Otherwise not only would the world bee much drier and duller, but society as a whole would develop in an unbalanced and distorted manner. 修改:分論點是否跑題段落間的連接,每句話間的連接 1)時間順序: before / prior to / after/ afterwards/ as soon as/ while 2)轉(zhuǎn)折對比: though/ despite (the fact that)/ whereas/ pared with 3)因果關(guān)系 4)條件關(guān)系: if / provided that / so long as/ unless 5) 遞進(jìn)關(guān)系: in addition/ besides/ furthermore/ moreover動詞時態(tài)名詞主謂冠詞(可數(shù)名詞作第三人稱單數(shù))拼寫大小寫標(biāo)點:不建議使用的標(biāo)點:! … “” 謹(jǐn)慎使用的? () ;提倡使用的 , .。 (基本句型) 1. 擴展主題句:A: 同義替換1. in other words換言之2. that is to say也就是說3. to be more precise說的具體一些4. by … I mean 我的意思是5. this means…這意味著6. Namely主題句中的名詞講清楚抽象名詞具體化The cost of living has been steadily rising in the past decades. Food prices, clothing costs, housing expenses, and tuition fees annually increased by % over the period of 1995 to 2008.TS: For one thing, offering academic knowledge can contribute to students’ achievement.使用拓展主題句方法展開: That is to say, in primary school, children should be instilled the ability of spell Chinese characters and basic mathematical knowledge which ensure them mastering the mon sense in daily life and offering the first step of further education. 展開支持句的方法:1. 因果展開An advantage of going to school at an early age is that children develop faster socially.展開句: they learn how to make friends with other children of a similar age. This is often not possible at home because their brothers or sisters are older or younger.Car panies should help people better under