【正文】 We continued our tour of the college, inspecting every building and every garden until the sun began to set. In the evening, we sat together, talking about the past and the future. We were so excited that no one wanted to go to bed. Studying Abroad Attending schools abroad has many advantages. In the first place, by looking at our own country from outside, we can best see the strong points and weak points of our nation and therefore widen our vision and broaden our minds. Second, while studying in a foreign country, we can travel widely, visiting famous scenic spots and making friends with the local people. Thirdly we can use the foreign language in our daily life so that our ability in the second language may be improved quickly. But the most important thing in attending a foreign university is to get acquainted with the latest knowledge in science and technology and make use of the firstrate facilities available. For all these advantages, it is really worthwhile to go abroad for education. However, as everything has two sides, there are also some disadvantages in attending a foreign university. The most serious。 ◇語言點(diǎn)提示： 注意 since, therefore, furthermore 等關(guān)聯(lián)詞的使用，使句間關(guān)系更加緊密。第三段，闡述大學(xué)生面對金融危機(jī)帶來的影響應(yīng)提高專業(yè)技能等。 ◇語言點(diǎn)提示： （ 1） downloads online 在線下載 （ 2） authentic copy 正版 ◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評：闡述打擊盜版軟件的具體做法，包括軟件商和政府采取的應(yīng)對措施。第二段，重點(diǎn)分析盜版軟件猖獗的主要原因。 ◇語言點(diǎn)提示： … public opinions are clearly divided 此句起承上啟下的作用 ◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評：主要闡述山寨產(chǎn)品的優(yōu)勢。第一段，概述方興未艾的山寨熱。 【范文】 Knowledge and Diploma It is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional petence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social reality – the higher diplomas one gets, the more popular he bees. On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesn’ t automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of one’ s educational experience rather than a guarantee of one’ s ability. Therefore, we can never measure the depth of one’ s knowledge by the grade of one’ s diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people don’ t have a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the world’ s most learned men. So I must say no one should ever equate a diploma with knowledge, because a diploma is nothing but a proof of a shortterm study while genuine knowledge needs one’ s lifelong devotion. ◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評：先陳述人們對高文憑高能力的看法，再點(diǎn)出這是一種社會現(xiàn)實(shí)。 ◇語言點(diǎn)提示： （ 1） keeping up with the Joneses 要在地位和物質(zhì)上比得上周圍的人 （ 2） conviction 堅(jiān)定的信仰、看法 （七） Knowledge and Diploma 1. 目前社會上存在這樣一種說法：文憑越高越吃香 2. 而有些人則認(rèn)為文憑不等于知識 3. 你的觀點(diǎn) ● 審題概述● 這是一篇論述高文憑與知識關(guān)系的文章。第二段，重點(diǎn)談你對此的看法。 ◇語言點(diǎn)提示：注意連接詞語 while， The former， They， The latter group of people 等的使用，強(qiáng)化了上下文之間的連貫性。第二段，論述人們對參加 課外培訓(xùn)班的不同看法。 ◇語言點(diǎn)提示： liberal arts majors 文科專業(yè)學(xué)生 ◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評：先總述引起大學(xué)生熱衷報(bào)考公務(wù)員的兩點(diǎn)因素，再詳細(xì)分述。第一段，主要綜述大學(xué)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員增多的現(xiàn)象。 ◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評：詳述網(wǎng)絡(luò)與人們生活的緊密關(guān)系，先總述，后分述。 【范文一】 How Will Our Life Go on without Inter? If asked whether the Inter is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Inter has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life. Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Inter. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Inter for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Inter if they’ d seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for munication, entertainment, banking and shopping. True, the power of the Inter is all pervasive and its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Inter addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than municate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence. Inter frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Inter with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself. ◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評：綜述網(wǎng)絡(luò)給人們生活帶來的多彩和便捷。 （三） How Will Our Life Go on without Inter? 1. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)提供給了人們豐富多彩和便捷的生活 2. 很多人開始感覺離開網(wǎng)絡(luò)寸步難行 3. 你對網(wǎng)絡(luò)依賴癥的看法 ● 審題概述● 本文是一篇論述你對網(wǎng)絡(luò)與人們生活關(guān)系的文章。第一段，主要陳述校園盜竊案件發(fā)生的情況。第一段，主要概述；第二段，說明原因；第三段，詳細(xì)論述措施。開篇綜述校園火災(zāi)頻發(fā)情形及造成的生命和財(cái)產(chǎn)損失，然后說明火災(zāi)原因，最后提出可能的火災(zāi)預(yù)防措施。 ◇語言點(diǎn)提示： take precautions 采取預(yù)防措施 fire extinguisher 滅火器 （二） Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts 1. 校園盜竊案件時(shí)有發(fā)生 2. 物品被盜的原因 3. 學(xué)生如何加強(qiáng)防盜意識 ●審題概述● 這是一篇論述校園物品被盜和加強(qiáng)防盜意識的文章。 【范文】 Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts “ If you don’ t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have bee increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, prepaid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen. What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of antitheft alertness is the most important. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summe