【正文】 t bar almost every weekend.　　3. 從句疊置　　as is known to all that puters play an important role in many fields of our life.　　4. 句子成分缺失　　if work hard, we will surely be successful.　　5. 語序錯誤　　1) why college students spend more and more time on the puter?　　2) i often wonder where have they got their money.　　(二)動詞錯誤　　　　many people thought that the internet will be more useful in the future.　　　　1) i have excited several days at the news that you will e here.　　2) most of the students satisfy with the service in the dining hall.　　　　1) wise man seek opportunities rather than wait for them.　　2) someone are afraid that puter may control men in the future.　　　　1) let me to represent everyone to say “hello” to you.　　2) do exercise in the morning is good for one’s health.　　3) having studied in our school for 3 years, the canteen service has changed a lot.　　(三)代詞錯誤　　1) we can use puters in doing everything you like.　　2) a college student should be able to do their washing on their own.　　(四)冠詞錯誤　　1) horse is an useful animal. 　　2) the exam will be held in the december, 2004.　　(五)詞性錯誤　　1) i wish you can consider my suggests.　　2) if a person wants to success, he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks.二、用詞錯誤　　1) students must know how to apply a puter.　　2) people can touch many new things on the internet.　　3) the purpose of this letter is to react some opinions on the service in the dining hall.　　三、表達習(xí)慣錯誤　　1) why generated so large a change?　　2) now 6000 yuan can buy a p4 puter.　　3) a room often lives 68 students.　　4) i think this great change has three reasons.　　5) the prices of the food are too expensive.　　6) the reason for this is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.　　四、標(biāo)點符號及大小寫錯誤　　1) however, every coin has two sides, i think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among all universities.　　2) the man was racing down the street. because he was late for the class.　　3) at last i want to let you know, i love our university very much.　　4) my favorite sports are swimming、jogging、mountaineering and playing table tennis.　　5) the best english film in my eyes is《forrest gump》.　　三、六級寫作題型分類　　(一)對立觀點型　　2000年6月　　directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a position on the topic is a test of spoken english necessary? the first sentence has already been written for you. you should write at least 120 words, and you should base your position on the outline (given in chinese) below:　　1. 很多人認(rèn)為有必要舉行英語口語考試，理由是......　　2. 也有人持不同意見，......　　3. 我的看法和打算　　1999年6月　　directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a position on the topic reading selectively or extensively? you should write at least 120 words and you should base your position on the outline (given in chinese) below` 　　1. 有些人認(rèn)為讀書要有選擇　　2. 有些人認(rèn)為應(yīng)當(dāng)博覽群書　　3. 我的看法　　1998年6月　　directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a position on the topic do “l(fā)ucky numbers” really bring good luck? you should write at least 120 words and you should base your position on the outline (given in chinese) below:　　1. 有些人認(rèn)為某些數(shù)字會帶來好運　　2. 我認(rèn)為數(shù)字和運氣無關(guān)......　　1997年6月　　directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a position on the topic my view on jobhopping. you should write at least 120 words and you should base your position on the outline (given in chinese) below:　　1. 有些人喜歡始終從事一種工作，因為......　　2. 有些人喜歡經(jīng)常更換工作，因為......　　3. 我的看法　　1996年1月　　directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a position based on the title: why i take college english test band 6. you should base your position on the following outline (given in chinese).　　1. 有些人認(rèn)為沒有必要參加大學(xué)英語六級考試　　2. 我參加cet6考試的理由　　1995年6月　　directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a position on the topic should firecrackers be banned? you should write at least 120 words and you should base your position on the outline (given in chinese) below:　　1. 有人認(rèn)為放鞭炮是好事，為什么?　　2. 有人認(rèn)為放鞭炮是壞事，為什么?　　3. 我的看法　　1993年6月　　directions: for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a position on the topic my view on opportunity. you must base your position on the following instructions (given in chinese):　　有的人認(rèn)為機會是極少的，另一些人則認(rèn)為人人都會有某種機會。 2. 規(guī)定內(nèi)容未寫全者，按比例扣分。] 11分……切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯誤。內(nèi)容和語言是一個統(tǒng)一體，作文應(yīng)表達題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過語言來表達。作文考試時間為30分鐘， 要求寫出不少于150個詞的短文。 上學(xué)吧：大學(xué)英語六級考試短文寫作精講－1一、六級寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 大學(xué)英語六級考試作文的目的旨在考核學(xué)生英語書面表達的能力。對作文的要求是：切題，文理通順，表達正確，意思連貫，無重大語言錯誤。 下面介紹六級考試作文的評分原則和標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，并通過五份樣卷作一個詳細說明。 （一） 作文評分原則閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎勵分（reward scores），而不是按語言點的錯誤數(shù)目扣分。 3. 從內(nèi)容和語言兩個方面對作文進行綜合評判。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯誤。 8分……基本切題?；旧蠠o語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。 [注： 白卷， 作文與題目毫不相關(guān)， 或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達思想，則給0分。 5. 字?jǐn)?shù)不足應(yīng)酌情扣分　　it pays to be honest ①in our modern social life， there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. advertisements cheat people， salesmen cheat people， even one‘s closest friends cheat him or her. so many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking： where is our honest exist？ everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in the kindergarten. honesty does good not only to ourselves， but to others as well. if we are honest to others. we will be happier and be in a better mood. otherwise， we‘ll feel guilt at last. to a pany and its advertisement， honesty will bring it more consumer and more profit. if we cheat others， friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone. to a pany， no consumer will buy your product again. so， as the above is said， it pays to be honest. let‘s create a morally outstanding social. ②although honesty is believed to be a virtue， there are still dishonest people in our society. for example， some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers； some students