【正文】 hich includes enough time for rest and other important values. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later. 人類社會的永恒話題 , 對比論述突出好處 ,比如堅持不懈 , 打敗自我 ,團隊精神 ,為人真誠 ,實事求是從正面列舉該積極事物的好處 ,克服困難 , 征服挑戰(zhàn) , 完善自我 ,走向成功 ,創(chuàng)造輝煌從反面列舉沒有 這個積極事物時的不好 , 郁悶迷茫 , 無成就感和前進動力 , 失敗挫折感最后要談兩點建議措施和聯(lián)想美好未來 . 話題：堅持不懈 在失敗的時候堅持 , 做好每一件小事為成功做好準備 . 首段：四句話，描述圖畫，表明圖畫發(fā)人深思。 There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. 此句子表明圖畫所微妙傳達的象征含義，發(fā)人深思，十四個單詞增加亮點，彌補首段字數(shù)不足，為下文點名觀點作好鋪墊 Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon that which plays an active part in our society. 二段：七句話，揭示象征含義，從正反兩方面論述該積極事物的重要性。 Perseverance means that people can persist on when they face the difficulty and prepare every detail for the ing ：毅力 —在困境中堅持，做好細節(jié)，準備成功； It is perseverance that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable , that makes us still full of energy to face the ing challenges and petition and that offers us the foundation for the ing ，大氣磅礴。倒裝句在 結(jié)尾補充再好不過。 話題二：打敗自我，不斷改正自身缺陷吸收別人長處，完善自我，自信面對人生； 1Defeating ourselves or Defeating others Defeating ourselvesfight with our defectsperfect ourselvesconfidentperseveranthave a better understanding of ourselves As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述圖畫 . The most striking feature is 圖畫重點信息 . There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息 profoundly indicates that defeating oneself rather than the other petitors is momentous (重要的 ) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. You have to fight with your own shorting and perfect yourself as much as possible. It is defeating ourselves that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the ing challenges and petition and that offers us the foundation for the ing success. Unless we defeat ourselves, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many people who do not have faith in themselves always lose the match. Only by defeating ourselves can they make full use of their advantages and have a strong will to always challenge themselves. From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to have a better understanding of oneself. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make yourself more petitive in the society. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to enrich our minds. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be more perseverant. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. 3. Team work 一個人蓋樓房很辛苦 , 很多人在一起建 , 他們臉上有很多笑容 . As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述圖畫 . The most striking feature is 圖畫重點信息 . There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息 profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的 ) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the ing challenges and petition and that offers us the foundation for the ing success. Unless we cooperate sincerely, , we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society. From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be active in taking a more tough job and always helpful and honest to other people. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. 4. 對別人真誠，有禮貌，無私奉獻，謙虛為人 Genuineness and cordiality are rewarding As is vividly depicted in the picture, a young man with a suitcase under his arm is stretches his hand to greet himself reflected in the mirror. The most striking feature is his image in the mirror is smiling at him sincerely. There is n