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改為:And we can also know the society by serving it ourselves. 六、累贅 同學們在寫書面表達時應(yīng)盡量做到簡潔:寫句子沒有一個多余的詞,寫段落沒有一個多余的句子?! 〗馕觯鹤x完上面這一句話,讀者無法明確地判斷兩位姑娘中誰將結(jié)婚,誰將當伴娘?! 〗馕觯簅ne是單數(shù)第三人稱,因而本句的have應(yīng)改為has;同理,want應(yīng)改為wants,本句是典型的主謂不一致?! 〗馕觯罕径魏蟀氩糠帧癋or example,by TV,radio,newspaper and so on.”不是一個完整的句子,僅為一些不連貫的詞語,不能獨立成句。 解析:better位置不當,應(yīng)置于句末?! 〗馕觯篿ndependence是名詞,句中誤用為動詞?! ±篢hey earn some money so that they can 。 例:I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the ,而且我將對校園外的世界有更好的了解?! ±篢here are many ways to know the society. For example, by TV, radio,newspaper and so ,比如,可以通過電