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by ourselves. But other students don’t like to use them. Their eyesight has been worse since they used mobile phones. Also, they can’t help playing with other apps while studying. This leads to bad results in their study. I think it is useful for us to use mobile phones . I can learn more at home without paying much money. But we should use them in a proper way.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干,這是屬于看法類的作文,那么在寫(xiě)這類作文時(shí),首先要分別寫(xiě)出支持和反對(duì)兩方面的看法及原因,最后要說(shuō)明自己的觀點(diǎn)看法來(lái)進(jìn)行總結(jié)。這引發(fā)了學(xué)生們是否喜歡用app學(xué)習(xí)的討論,為此,英文報(bào)Teens 將在下期開(kāi)設(shè)專欄討論這一話題,你采訪了一些同學(xué),寫(xiě)了一篇題為“Would you like to study on apps?”的報(bào)道。注意采用一些習(xí)慣的句式,固定短語(yǔ),以使自己的演講稿更有文采。內(nèi)容要求中指出了寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)組織材料,確定句子人稱,時(shí)態(tài)等問(wèn)題。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外,還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言,大小寫(xiě)是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料?!军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文,向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個(gè)溫情的中國(guó)家庭。我們的國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無(wú)誤。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì),考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。(3)要點(diǎn)齊全,行文連貫,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。m sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。其次短文使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,短文主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí),動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確,尤其注意了不規(guī)則動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式形式,語(yǔ)法規(guī)范,用詞準(zhǔn)確?!军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,短文作者根據(jù)題目要求,寫(xiě)了一篇演講稿。其次要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的,不能按照漢語(yǔ)思維,逐詞翻譯。題目中用問(wèn)題的形式給出了提示,審題可知,文章應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:首先敘述你生活中遇到的一件困難的事;然后介紹你是如何克服了這個(gè)困難,最后取得成功的;最后說(shuō)一下你自己的感受。(3)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。而非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop believe that reading can increase ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的亮點(diǎn)。你的計(jì)劃? (至少一個(gè))?(請(qǐng)你補(bǔ)充)注意:(1)郵件應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)(2)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù));(3)不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息,否則不予評(píng)分注:社會(huì)實(shí)踐 social practice activitiesDear DavidI39。你們班的外教David對(duì)此很感興趣。寫(xiě)作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作常識(shí),不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言,列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱,確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)和關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。3.假如你是李明,5月18日星期六這一天,你與幾位同班同學(xué)一起參觀了水上公園 (Water Park)?!驹斀狻窟@是篇材料作文。我是能聽(tīng)會(huì)說(shuō)的小音樂(lè)機(jī)器人,只要你對(duì)我說(shuō)歌曲的名字, 我就能唱給你聽(tīng)。 不過(guò)其后“介”或“副”,變后還得要承認(rèn)。 原句“賓補(bǔ)”變“主補(bǔ)”,位置不必挪寸分。 原句若是雙賓語(yǔ),一變“主”來(lái)一?!百e”。 as well 。常見(jiàn)考點(diǎn)有neither...nor。常考的一些并列連詞還有not only…but also, either…or, neither…nor, as well as等 【例2】(上海43題) I hate travelling by air _________ we usually have to wait for hours before the plane takes off.A) because B) though C) until D) unless【答案】A【解析】本題考查連詞中的從屬連詞之原因狀語(yǔ)從句,主要考查上下句邏輯關(guān)系。see sb do sth(主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)) sb be seen to do(被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài))一感二聽(tīng)三使(使役動(dòng)詞)四看feelhear、listen tomake、let、have (馬蘭花)see、watch、notice、observe5)系表結(jié)構(gòu)PK被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)有些“be +過(guò)去分詞”的結(jié)構(gòu)并不是被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài),它們有可能是“系表結(jié)構(gòu)(即系動(dòng)詞之后由過(guò)去分詞來(lái)充當(dāng)表語(yǔ))。需要注意的是:若把直接賓語(yǔ)變成被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的主語(yǔ),需要在間接賓語(yǔ)之間加上介詞“to”。中考英語(yǔ)核心突破(被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài))(帶答案)被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài) 考點(diǎn)解讀 思維導(dǎo)圖 千萬(wàn)不要忘記還有:情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+be done 哦!1. 把握動(dòng)詞類型,辨別被動(dòng)與否1)及物動(dòng)詞有被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài),不及物動(dòng)詞必須帶有介詞才可以有被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)eg: We listen to the teacher carefully in class. 主 謂 賓→The teacher is listened to by us carefully in class. 主 謂 介詞短語(yǔ)比較: 2)初中階段不使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的情況a)系動(dòng)詞無(wú)被動(dòng) The dish tastes delicious. The apple smells sweet. b)某些說(shuō)明名詞本身性質(zhì)的動(dòng)詞。 (錯(cuò)) The price has been risen. (對(duì)) The price has risen. (錯(cuò)) The accident was happened last week.(對(duì)) The accident happened last week. (錯(cuò)) The price has raised. (對(duì)) The price has been raised. 3)雙賓語(yǔ)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)有些動(dòng)詞帶有兩個(gè)