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ss than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,給Billy回封電子郵件,介紹自己平時(shí)的鍛煉情況,并建議他每周都要花些時(shí)間鍛煉身體。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如like reading,more than,all kinds of,spend time doing,enjoy doing,the number of,twice a year,be the chief engineer of等。句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整,符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn):首先文章內(nèi)容完整,結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。另外注意句式結(jié)構(gòu)要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣,用完整的句子表達(dá)。審題可知,這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí),注意根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用正確時(shí)態(tài),并注意謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式。s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford ;另外文章中還使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,如Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all等等。分段敘述使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,主題明確,有層次性。語句之間注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使整篇文章意思連貫、表達(dá)流暢。題目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內(nèi)容,包括:共享單車的優(yōu)勢;存在的問題以及你自己對(duì)這件事情的看法。s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What39。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.,Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。s helpful to people39。11.F解析:Today,as a greener means of transportation, bikesharing is being more and more popular in many cities. It39。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí),靈活運(yùn)用動(dòng)詞的過去式。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句,增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。文章主要內(nèi)容為計(jì)劃的書寫,主要使用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)。當(dāng)主語是第三人稱單數(shù)時(shí),注意主謂一致關(guān)系。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。介紹發(fā)生的一件難忘的事情,要用到一般過去時(shí)態(tài)。題目給出了標(biāo)題及寫作要點(diǎn)。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要為第一人稱。【點(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;同時(shí)注意語句要通順,詞匯書寫無誤,不要出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤。為感受母愛情深,弘揚(yáng)知恩圖報(bào),要求以Myt have much money.She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend.She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.When I grow up,I will do what I can to make my mother happy.I will find a good job after I graduate from college.I39。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒,就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了,在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。構(gòu)思提綱。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外,還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理,有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,格式是否正確,詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。有了提綱,我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料?!军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起:認(rèn)真審題。3.A解析:In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”(113w)【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文,描述對(duì)節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓勵(lì)大家相互幫助,并讓世界充滿正能量。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作。s all. Thank you!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。 help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.Thank you for listening!【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,根據(jù)所給提示用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,內(nèi)容包括回顧美麗的校園、生動(dòng)有趣的教學(xué)、三年來的收獲;感謝老師的培養(yǎng)、父母的支持、同學(xué)的幫助;祝愿,在寫作中適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,語句通順,符合邏輯,符合發(fā)言稿的格式,沒有出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名。Dear Jessica, I39。Dear students , As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious airpollution____________________________________________________________________________ 20.李華的英國筆友Jessica來信說, 她想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。(至少寫2點(diǎn))(2) 空氣污染產(chǎn)生的原因。 。請(qǐng)以 My junior high school life為題,寫一篇80詞左右的短文。、校名和地名。4. 至少80詞。3. 談?wù)勫憻捊o你帶來了哪些好處。寫作要點(diǎn):1. 你最近正忙于為即將到來的體育測試(physical test)做準(zhǔn)備。2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)正式姓名,校名。優(yōu)秀事跡上個(gè)月把零花錢捐給了希望工程未來夢想1. 希望成為連接家鄉(xiāng)到上海路段的高鐵總工程師2. 每個(gè)人為保護(hù)環(huán)境都可以做一些改變。m going to graduate from my beloved school. 14.書面表達(dá)根據(jù)以下提示,寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽的短文。美好的回憶; ;; 。,文章的開頭部分已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。社會(huì)現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn),飽受贊譽(yù)。11. 如今,很多城市出現(xiàn)了一種綠色出行方式――共享單車(bikesharing),它因環(huán)保、便捷而備受青睞,但同時(shí)也引發(fā)了一些問題。 At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ ▲ 10.為了宣傳和弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化, 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動(dòng)來介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事, “程門立雪(Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully)”是其中一個(gè)選題。1. 簡要介紹你最好的朋友的外貌和性格。短詩如下:My English Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of why.We all respect and admire her. 注意事項(xiàng):,不得抄寫短詩原文:、意思連貫、符合情境。ispersonneedMotherWebestmy參考詞匯:give要點(diǎn)提示:三條家規(guī)尊老愛幼,禮貌待人誠實(shí)守信,不斷學(xué)習(xí)按時(shí)作息,杜絕熬夜你對(duì)你家家規(guī)的看法......簡單闡述你是如何受益的......寫作要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使行文流暢、通順;;。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _______4.俗話說,國有國法,家有家規(guī)。請(qǐng)你在網(wǎng)上給What would you do?本期節(jié)目留言,內(nèi)容包括:1. 你對(duì)節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法;2. 說說你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例;3. 呼吁大家互幫互助,彼此感恩,讓社會(huì)充滿正能量。(可聯(lián)系實(shí)際,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮)注意:1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2. 發(fā)言稿須包括所有要點(diǎn),不要逐詞翻譯,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順;發(fā)言稿不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。注意:1. 90詞左右。m a Dream Teenager”為題,寫一篇80-100詞的短文,向大家推介自己。生活中,我們需要他人的幫助,也要學(xué)會(huì)幫助他人。 作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出,不必抄寫在試卷上,也不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。假如你是李華,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)的要點(diǎn)提示,并結(jié)合你的家庭實(shí)際情況,給你的英國筆友Sam寫一封信,向他介