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t and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇材料作文。所以在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中,我們要滿懷希望、努力奔跑、追逐夢想。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。m a Dream Teenager”為題,寫一篇短文,向大家推介自己。 As a fifteenyearold boy, my dream is to be a good teacher. To make my dream e true, I study hard at school and I am good at all my subjects. Also, I am an outgoing and healthy boy who likes football very much, and I really enjoy sports. At school, I always follow the school rules, so I am popular with my classmates and teachers. On weekends, I39。s great honor for me to make a speech here.m a Dream Teenager學(xué)校開展了“夢想少年”的主題演講活動(dòng),假如你是張明,請根據(jù)以下提供的要點(diǎn),以“I39。文章條理分明,三個(gè)要點(diǎn)提示都已表達(dá)清楚,并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展,所給單詞也都全部用上。提示詞語: Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題: ● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?● What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá),只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示,但都不很明確。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用,使文意連接緊密,還要注意使用豐富的語句,注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系,最后最好要表達(dá)出人物的感想和看法。為了倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生接近大自然,某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)舉辦了一次征文活動(dòng),請你根據(jù)以下問題,用英語寫一篇短文參加征文。最后要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣,英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的,要注意不能逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語。請你用英語寫一篇有關(guān)霧霾的短文向??坝⒄Z角”投稿,內(nèi)容包括:1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因(2個(gè)) 3. 應(yīng)對(duì)霧霾的措施(3個(gè))提示:霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意:1. 詞數(shù)110左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開頭語已為你寫好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。最后向Bill提出問題,結(jié)束全文。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢想中的職業(yè),讓學(xué)生對(duì)未來有憧憬,給一部分提示詞,讓學(xué)生有話可說。5. 假如你是李華, 你的美國筆友Bill給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件, 想了解你的夢想職業(yè)。s a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in ,既使短文層次清晰,又豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如I39。s necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I39。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。4.書面表達(dá)同學(xué)們,中考后就會(huì)迎來漫長的暑假了,班會(huì)課上老師組織大家討論假期學(xué)習(xí)和生活計(jì)劃。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。常用的重點(diǎn)句型和短語有:sb. spend some time doing sth.,in order to do sth.,try to do sth.,the importance of…等。根據(jù)題干要求可知,本篇文章主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)寫作,人稱用第三人稱復(fù)數(shù)和第一人稱?,F(xiàn) 狀大約70%學(xué)生眼睛近視主要原因1. 睡眠不足2. 長時(shí)間看書、做作業(yè)、用電腦等預(yù)防方法1. 做眼睛保健操,多進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)2. 養(yǎng)成正確的用眼習(xí)慣你的觀點(diǎn)… ….(至少一條)參考詞匯:近視的 shortsighted要求:(1)詞數(shù):80~100個(gè)。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。m going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如how to do,spend a meaningful summer vacation,half of,plan to do,travel at home and abroad,enjoy the beautiful scenery,take part