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easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students'jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求,這是一篇看法類的作文,那么首先得點(diǎn)明討論的話題,然后分別寫出不同人群對(duì)此事的看法,時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。 不同意:1.很臟,容易使學(xué)生生病。 這件事在學(xué)生中引 起了強(qiáng)烈的反響,請(qǐng)你把下列不同意見整理成一篇書面材料,報(bào)告給學(xué)校。例文點(diǎn)評(píng):例文采用的是一段式,寫的是閱讀的好處,時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),描述倡議時(shí),描寫細(xì)致,條理清晰。8.4月23日是“世界讀書日”,你校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部正在開展主題為“多讀書,讀好書”的活動(dòng)。高分亮點(diǎn):短語(yǔ):save energy;brush our teeth;put it into different bins;take action;make a big difference。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。寫作亮點(diǎn):這篇文章講了自己最喜歡的玩具槍,描述玩具槍的時(shí)候有適當(dāng)?shù)募?xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充,例如a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth(用黃布包著的玩具槍),這里用到了過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ),作者還描述了玩具槍的功能(small plastic pills),順便還描述了自己小時(shí)候玩槍的經(jīng)歷,準(zhǔn)確使用了時(shí)態(tài)。要求:1. 請(qǐng)?jiān)陬}目空白處填上你心愛(ài)物品的名字;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。其次,開始具體陳述觀點(diǎn),陳述的時(shí)候要適當(dāng)使用實(shí)例,相關(guān)用到的短語(yǔ)有have some difficulties in doing在做…的時(shí)候有困難,review the knowledge復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí),think over the difficulties來(lái)回思考難點(diǎn),Little by little一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析:審題之后能明白寫作任務(wù)是要寫出一篇小論文,討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的。【答案】Dear students,I39。一直以來(lái),同學(xué)們對(duì)作業(yè)持有不同的觀點(diǎn)?!军c(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,符合邏輯,先表明自己觀點(diǎn),然后闡述事情,提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德,在寫作過(guò)程中,注意文章結(jié)構(gòu),先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情,然后再說(shuō)自己對(duì)此的看法。因此,Lingling很生氣,并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。此處because of, in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。有人認(rèn)為學(xué)校應(yīng)當(dāng)開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課(set up traditional culture classes),但也有人認(rèn)為沒(méi)有必要。點(diǎn)睛:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.【答案】Dear fellows, The Dragon Boat Festival, also called the Duanwu Festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese celebrate the holiday on June18 this year . People hold the dragonboat races in memory of Qu Yuan,one of the greatest poets in China. We can watch the dragonboat races and eat a kind of Chinese food named Zongzi during the Dragon boat Festival. People always hang Calamus and Moxa on the wele to experience this traditional festival with friends from all over the world.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文,向來(lái)自不同國(guó)家的同學(xué)介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。t make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my 【答案】Once, I couldn39。作文要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。內(nèi)容包括:(事情,原因及后果);。Once, I couldn39。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理。2.書面表達(dá)李華所在的國(guó)際學(xué)校正在開展“My Favourite Traditional Festival”交流活動(dòng),假定你是李華,請(qǐng)你向來(lái)自不同國(guó)家的同學(xué)介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié),內(nèi)容包括:1. 今年慶祝時(shí)間(6月18日)2. 節(jié)日由來(lái):紀(jì)念(be in memory of)屈原3. 吃粽子,賽龍舟,掛菖蒲和艾草(calamus and Ay Tsao)……4. 歡迎大家一起體驗(yàn)這個(gè)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日注意:1. 詞數(shù)80~100;,以使行文連貫;;,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。3.書面表達(dá)隨著電子時(shí)代的到來(lái),西方文化如潮水般涌來(lái),中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的傳承面臨著巨大的挑戰(zhàn)。結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問(wèn)題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:Chinese traditional culture is facing……,it’s necessary for schools to……,we shouldn’t……,They can raise……,it is of great importance to……等句式的應(yīng)用。開頭介紹了中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化面對(duì)的問(wèn)題,接下來(lái)介紹我認(rèn)為開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的必要性的原因,最后號(hào)召更多的學(xué)校開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課。上周末,他本來(lái)和Lingling相約一起去電影院看電影,但是他卻因?yàn)樵诩覐?fù)習(xí)考試,把這件事忘了,直到第二天才想起來(lái)。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize(強(qiáng)調(diào)) the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.