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_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people. Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks. How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on. What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear pletely. 【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹有關(guān)霧霾的情況,題目中給出了寫作的內(nèi)容,我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達出來。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主,也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句,還有一些好的句型,如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。短文先對Dave發(fā)出邀請,然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點、文化等,并提出了建議。如可以使用簡單句結(jié)構(gòu),易于掌握,不容易出錯。,不計入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave,I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫信,邀請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游,題目中列出了文章的提綱,審題可知,短文應(yīng)從以下幾個內(nèi)容敘述:首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置;然后介紹來這里最好的時候;接下來是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化,并給出建議。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱,文章主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時,謂語動詞形式準確。但為提升作文檔次,應(yīng)穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句,或使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu),如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等。題目中只給出了大概的提綱,其中具體的內(nèi)容應(yīng)由學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力來補充,并用正確的英語表達出來。t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of afterclasses on weekends.就此問題,老師要求你在英語課上做一個以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”為題的報告,談?wù)勀愕淖龇?,與同學分享經(jīng)驗。點睛:書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。4.(題文) 書面表達在中學生機器人大賽上,出現(xiàn)了一種專門照顧老人的新型家用智能機器人,它的主要功能有:1. 定時做飯、洗衣服; 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做運動;3. 處理緊急情況(如:撥打120)假如你是該機器人的發(fā)明者,請你介紹這個產(chǎn)品,并談?wù)勀愕奈磥碓O(shè)想。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系。【答案】Hi,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many paren