【正文】 r forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears. I felt proud of cooking on my own.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以O(shè)ne thing I felt very proud of為題，介紹自己曾經(jīng)做過的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。河南中考模擬）“苔花如米小,也學(xué)牡丹開。注意表達(dá)的順序。要學(xué)以致用。最后我原諒了他。我生邁克的氣是因?yàn)樗麄α宋业母星椤Ｎ业攘撕荛L時(shí)間，但邁克最終沒有出現(xiàn)。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。短文必須包含提示問題和提示詞。t show up in the end. I called him and asked him what happened. He forgot all about the concert. He was playing puter games at home at that time.I got angry with Mike because he hurt my feelings. Mike also realized his mistake. He called me several times and said sorry to me. He even sent me a present to make me happy. Finally I forgave him. After forgiving him, I felt relaxed and happy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文談?wù)勆钪心阍徦说囊淮谓?jīng)歷，主要內(nèi)容包括: 你們之間發(fā)生了什么，你為什么原諒了對(duì)方，以及原諒對(duì)方之后的感受。字?jǐn)?shù)80字左右。我愿意幫助別人。提示詞語: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve bee interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to bee one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.【解析】【分析】本文一篇話題作文。包括時(shí)間、人物、事情經(jīng)過和事后你的感想。另外為了應(yīng)對(duì)考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。同時(shí)注意時(shí)間狀語與時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問題，適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤，做到語意連貫。（1），游客多；（2）上午劃船，下午看了許多動(dòng)物，例如…：（3）碰到幾位外國朋友并與他們交談：（4）看到了亂扔垃圾、插隊(duì)等不良現(xiàn)象：（5）你的感想…參考詞匯：.插隊(duì)cut in line要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80?100個(gè)。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。而感嘆句How time flies!，倒裝句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it spoken English when municating with ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。此處go by, e to an end, tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。要求：1. 文章包含以上提示內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。貴州遵義十一中中考模擬）親愛的同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束，,名城中學(xué)九（1）班的學(xué)生。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。s more, to be a teacher could contribute a lot both to their students and to the society. To be a teacher should be interesting but challenging. So I must study hard to learn a lot of knowledge and I should learn how to get on well with others. If I have a chance one day, I will choose to be a teacher.【解析】【分析】這是一篇話題作文，以My Career Planning為話題，介紹我的職業(yè)規(guī)劃。作為即將畢業(yè)的初中學(xué)生，我們也是時(shí)候該思考我們的職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃了。寫作時(shí)，先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。a） A friend in need is a friend indeed.b） Where there’s a will, there’s a way.參考詞匯：諺語 proverb____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】A Friend in Need is a Friend IndeedA life without friends is a life without sunshine! Friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confidence. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After knowing the news, my friend encouraged me patiently. She insisted on persuading me until I promised to give up this thought.Later, I made up my mind to study hard so as to enter my dream university.Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will leave footprints in your hear. True friends always e to you when you need help.【解析】【分析】這是命題作文。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。而固定句型It is very important for us to know how to treasure and protect our we can learn to treasure and protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthy body and a better ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容；同時(shí)First of all,/ Secondly,/ Thirdly,和Finally,等詞使表達(dá)條理，層次清晰，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)你以“How to Protect Our Lives”為題，從安全和健康的角度入手，寫一篇如何珍惜和保護(hù)我們生命的短文，要點(diǎn)如下：1. 交通安全，校園安全2. 健康的飲食和生活3. ... ...參考詞匯：treasure（v.）珍惜注意：1. 詞數(shù)80~100；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱。合肥市第四十二中學(xué)中考模擬）每個(gè)人的生命只有一次。t play dangerous games.Thirdly, we should eat some healthy foods, such as vegetables, fruits, and so on. They are able to help us maintain a healthy body.Finally, a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body. We should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep. If we can learn to treasure and protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthy body and a better life.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如how to do，first of all，obey the traffic rules，pay attention to，such