【正文】 別人。14．（文章最后的兩句話也點(diǎn)明了文章的主題。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。寫作時(shí)要注意按照事情發(fā)展的先后順序，這樣可以使文章條理清楚。 translate into 把翻譯成；in order to為了； used to do過去常常做某事13．（北京中考模擬）現(xiàn) 在 ，某 英 文 網(wǎng) 站 正 在 開 展 以 “成 就 ”為 主 題 的 征 文 活 動(dòng) ?假 如 你 是 李 華 ，請(qǐng) 用 英 語 寫 一篇 短 文 投 稿 ?談 一 談 你 經(jīng) 歷 的 讓 你 很 有 成 就 感 的 一 件 事 情 ，主 要 內(nèi) 容 包 括 :你 取 得 了 什 么 成就 ，你 是 如 何 做 到 的 ，以 及 你 在 取 得 成 就 的 過 程 中 學(xué) 到 了 什 么 ?提 示 詞 語 :write，translate，friend，help，teamwork，better提 示 問 題 :1. What achievement have you made?2. How did you make it?3. What have you learnt from the experience?【答案】Last year I wrote my own book of poetry. This book is special because I worked with a closeforeign friend to translate some Chinese poems into English，which was very challenging. In order tomake them better accepted and easier to understand，we collected lots of materials from the libraryand the Internet. It took me and my friend one year to translate them.During the process of translating the poems and working with my friend，I learned a lot aboutthe world around me and really got in touch with my soul. Furthermore，I think my English is betterthan it used to be. Most importantly，I learned the value of teamwork. My friend and I weredetermined to finish this huge task and that39。修改潤色。初寫短文。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如it is adj for sb to do, on time, make good use of以及first of all, what’s more, besides和last but not least。3. …… 寫作要求：，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。陜西師大附中中考模擬）隨著中考的臨近，初三同學(xué)感到壓力很大， 有些人由于學(xué)習(xí)方法不當(dāng)，盲目刷題或連 續(xù)熬夜，導(dǎo)致上課時(shí)精力不足，考試成績?cè)桨l(fā)不理想。本篇文章觀點(diǎn)明確，在陳述自己觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，用到Besides…What’s more….等使文章很條理性和連貫性。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示，以“ I ____ （am/am not） willing to vote for others” 為題寫一篇短文，向?？陡?，選擇你認(rèn)同的一種觀點(diǎn)，并闡述自己的理由?！靖叻志湫投縄 think these rules are good for us. 我認(rèn)為這些規(guī)則對(duì)我們有好處。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。School safety_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】School safetyMore and more people pay special attention to the school safety nowadays. Here are some rules to keep us safe.First, as students, we should follow the school rules, such as not being late for school and leaving school early. Second, we shouldn’t go with strangers and we shouldn’t accept things from strangers. Third, it’s better for us to have partners on the way home and to school and we must get home before dark. Fourth, if we are in trouble, don’t forget to tell our parents or teachers as soon as possible.I think these rules are good for us. We must obey them.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下校園安全。9．（同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。（1）下周將要進(jìn)行期末考試。8．（作者觀點(diǎn)明確，理由充分。同時(shí)語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯映煞?，使文意連貫、自然。其次要注意英語句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。首先學(xué)生們應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察圖片，了解圖片中發(fā)生的場(chǎng)景，弄清楚它主要想傳達(dá)的意思，然后用英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。小林和小剛之間的對(duì)話，讓你 想到了什么？請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)圖片的理解，用英語寫一篇 100 詞左右的短文?！靖叻志湫投縄n my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. 在我看來，旅行時(shí)，人們不僅要注意安全，還要注意衛(wèi)生，不要到處亂扔垃圾。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第三人稱?！敬鸢浮縇ast May Day holiday, Li Ming and his family went to Qingdao seaside. They paid a visit to Qingdao by bus. There are many places of interest in Qingdao. They went to the beach, visited the Museum. But there were many people on the beach. What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. At the seaside, people don39。6．（時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)，靈活運(yùn)用動(dòng)詞的過去式。內(nèi)容提示：1. 楊時(shí)去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時(shí)在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時(shí)在門口2. 通過介紹這個(gè)故事, 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點(diǎn)。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通順。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。注意：詞數(shù)80—100；行文連貫，邏輯合理；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名； 文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。而你的朋友Daming最近卻被誠信危機(jī)所困擾。在寫作時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，這樣才可以更好的駕馭。d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. It is small, so you can even carry it in your backpack. After you connect it to the Internet and speak to it, it can provide different kinds of services. For example, you just say, Ding Dong, I want to listen to SHE39。陜西中考模擬） 下周一下午輪到你在英語課上做課堂報(bào)告, 你打算把你爸爸最近網(wǎng)購的音樂機(jī)器人（music robot）介紹給同學(xué)們。，開頭句“regard my English teacher as one of my best teachers.”直入主題，正文部分詳細(xì)描述了老師如何耐心的多方面的幫助自己， is so kind and helpful that I can’t forget her in my school 。要求: ，如teacher. classmate或trip等:2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校姓名。2．（假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文投稿。北京中考模擬）現(xiàn)在，某英文報(bào)紙正在開展以＂遇見美＂為主題的征文活動(dòng)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：in front of sb在某人面前；give ；用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，如：The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of heroism and the sad reality during if引導(dǎo)的從句，如：As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the 。講述一個(gè)你最難忘的人或事?！驹斀狻?，確定寫作的目標(biāo)，寫自己3年初中校園生活里難忘的人或事，描述難忘的人用第三人稱，講述過去發(fā)生的事情用一般過去時(shí)，開頭和結(jié)尾一般性闡述，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；書寫時(shí)要圍繞中心“unforgettable”，敘述清楚具體的事件或情節(jié)，文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰明了，注意短語、句型的正確使用。3．（我還有其他本領(lǐng)……參考詞匯:small, clever, ask it about weather, problems in study, remind you of important dates, convenient要求:1. 參考提示, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2. 語句涌順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)信息；Good morning, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce the music robot my father bought online. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________