【正文】 looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這篇作文要求我們以中學(xué)生李華的身份，給Liz Payne寫(xiě)一個(gè)留言。5．假設(shè)你是來(lái)自中國(guó)的中學(xué)生李華,打算參加當(dāng)?shù)亟M織的國(guó)外冬令營(yíng),看完了這個(gè)網(wǎng)頁(yè)后,你打算給Liz Payne留言,表達(dá)你在冬令營(yíng)期間想去London Canal Museum參觀的愿望。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。（2）開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。根據(jù)下表提示,寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時(shí)發(fā)表你自己對(duì)暑假安排的觀點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】高分句型：I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way．我認(rèn)為正確的方式使用手機(jī)對(duì)學(xué)生是有幫助的。 eyes. In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way. Firstly，students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫(xiě)作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏。 觀點(diǎn)理由一些學(xué)生贊成擁有方便與家長(zhǎng)聯(lián)系；一些老師反對(duì)擁有有學(xué)生用手機(jī)玩游戲；有學(xué)生用手機(jī)作弊；你的觀點(diǎn)1. 2.要求：1. 表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；`2. 必須包含表格所給的提示信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 詞數(shù)：80100詞左右（征文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by you feel unfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。而特殊非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)Jim taught me how to play a kind of puter think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。20202021年 中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)易錯(cuò)大盤(pán)點(diǎn)經(jīng)典1一、中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1．你有沒(méi)有因?yàn)闆](méi)能好好管理時(shí)間而影響了學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷?請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇文章談?wù)勥@件事及你的看法。、校名和地名。t make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of puter game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset. How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。s our duty to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.Love,Amy【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如be glad to，hear from，unlike in the West，on the table，a sign of，help sb. do，do some housework，wash the dishes，clean the room，make the bed，take care of，how to do等。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。你們學(xué)校的?？⑽陌嬲诰痛伺e行征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇征文。s worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students39?？梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句型。4． 書(shū)面表達(dá)暑假即將來(lái)臨,對(duì)于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個(gè)假期,家長(zhǎng)們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。s opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeing…Your opinion…注意]（1）表格中的觀點(diǎn)僅供參考,允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________