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dtime.While radio listening starts rising in the early morning, the TV watching level is close to zero. As the day proceeds, we see a constant upward fluctuation that es to a peak of 45% around 8:00 PM with a rise at 8:00 to 10:00 AM and another one at 1:00 to 2:00 PM. From 8:00 PM on, a steady decline to about 38% is followed by a drop to, again, almost zero in the next few hours. 一般分成2個部分:介紹段、主體段(To be continued)04/09/2009第二章 介紹段不抄題目,改寫題目。2) 遵循時間、最高原則。二、主題段句子寫作寶典:將數(shù)字逐一寫出是一種讓閱卷官嘔吐不止的寫法,But, 好句子一般有三個部分1)文字信息2)數(shù)字信息3)比較例子1: The average US family had people in 1919, in 1967 and in 2006. (吐)改后:Average family size in the US has been shrinking, from people in 1967 to people in 2006, pared with people in 1919.例子2:Nonmetropolitan counties had a property crime rate of 1,250 per 100,000 people, and metropolitan counties experienced a rate of 2,529 offenses per 100,000 inhabitants. 改后: The property crime rate in nonmetropolitan counties was relatively low, 1,250 per 100,000 people, less than half the rate in metropolitan counties(2, 529 offenses per 100,000 inhabitants).好例子: The lowest wages are found in Hong Kong and Athens: 3 and 4 pounds respectively, but while taxes are a little higher in Athens than in Hong Kong (% vs. 15%), rents are by far cheaper (700 vs. 2400 pounds).更多例子可參考104頁《套路剖析》,熟悉這種寫法。 There is/was +a 形容詞(猛,大,小,穩(wěn)等形容詞)+上升(名詞) in STH216。 上面第五種句型STH 上升(動詞)+副詞((猛,大,小,穩(wěn)等副詞)還可以用其他方式表示上升的程度,這樣句子會更靈動。6. This river is three times the depth of that one. 這條河深度是那條河的三倍。In Great Britain, in 1930, imprisonment figures stood at 30, they increased threefold, to 90,000 by 1980.In Great Britain, in 1930, imprisonment figures stood at 30, they tripled to 90,000 by 1980. [練一練]1. Americans eat ________ vegetables per person today as they did in 1910.A. more than twice B. as twice as manyC. twice as many as D. more than twice as many2. Paper produced every year is _______ the world39。 and finally e lamb, fish and others at 15%, 5% and 2% respectively. 總結(jié):括號使用分詞(followed by)從句with+名詞做狀語、as against+名詞做狀語pared with+名詞做狀語總結(jié):第五章 介詞使用注意如下的介詞使用.一. remain steady/ stay steady/ peak/reach its summit/ 后面需要使用的是at.舉例: 人口在500萬上保持平穩(wěn): The number of population remained steady at 5 million.1. 人口在800萬時到達(dá)了頂峰:The number of population peaked at 8 million.2. 下降后,人口在400萬保持平穩(wěn):After decreasing, the number of population remained steady at 4 million.二. 上升/下降后面使用to(到)和by(了)舉例:1. 人口下降到200萬: The number of population decreased to 2 million.2. 人口下降了200萬: The number of population decreased by 2 million.3. 人口上升到1000萬: The number of population increased to 10 million.4. 人口上升了500萬: The number of population increased by 5 million.三. fluctuate的后面大家需要連接between …..and…..舉例: 人口在2和100億之間波動:The number of population fluctuated between 2 and 10 billion.四.Between 1889 and 1890By 2005Since 1995=from 1995 on(onwards)During the period from the mid1980s to the early 1990sOver the same period/during the same periodIn the whole course范文欣賞并改寫步驟審題目:(題目相關(guān)的內(nèi)容和時間)審文字:圖標(biāo)文字信息,比如坐標(biāo)軸數(shù)據(jù)代表的信息,度量單位(圖三)審數(shù)字: (不止一個圖表)103頁+106頁《套路》,95頁改寫33。 1. Japan led other countries in life expectancy ( years)。)(2) 倍數(shù)+比較級 (意思是:A是B的幾倍)在比較級前,還可以用over,more than 等表示“比……倍還要多”。 Percentage1. The number of male smokers in 1960 stood at 21%, pared to 16% of the female population.2. It can be seen in the pie chart, chicken, which makes up 40%, is the most popular among the total meat sold, then next is pork with 20%, followed by beef, constituting 18%。 STH be on a + 形容詞(猛,大,小,穩(wěn)等形容詞)+上升(名詞)216。 例句:我們可以使用的套用結(jié)構(gòu)有:動詞:increase/rise/climb/ expand/ swell名詞:increase/rise/climb/expansion/swell△ Big Increase1. The biggest change occurred in the period 1985 to 1995, when high school graduates enjoyed the greatest increase in earnings.2. Over the thirtyyear period, there was a big increase in earnings amongst people with high school certificates(£85).3. China experienced/saw a significant rise in puterrelated work.4. There was a dramatic increase, in 1970, in the number of university graduates.5. Japan experienced a massive increase in car ownership in the 1930s.6. There was a significant difference in the money people spent on CDs in the Northern Territories between August and September, from 25% to 48%.7. A slight increase