【正文】 Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫(xiě)信，邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游，題目中列出了文章的提綱，審題可知，短文應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容敘述：首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置；然后介紹來(lái)這里最好的時(shí)候；接下來(lái)是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化，并給出建議。如可以使用簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)，易于掌握，不容易出錯(cuò)。短文先對(duì)Dave發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點(diǎn)、文化等，并提出了建議。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。要點(diǎn)提示 :,做好筆記。注意 :。Dear Sam ,I39。t be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you39。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能按照漢語(yǔ)的思維逐詞翻譯，寫(xiě)漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢。這一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等詞，敘述條理、有層次；最后一段用一句話(huà)對(duì)整篇文章做了總結(jié)。文章中使用了較為豐富的短語(yǔ)和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it39。,詞數(shù)不少于80。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。表述靈活。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封倡議書(shū)，向全體同學(xué)發(fā)出號(hào)召。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。我們的國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平多次強(qiáng)調(diào)良好家風(fēng)家規(guī)的重要性。Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sam,Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.In my opinion, every family must keep rules and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture. What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本文屬于材料作文，向山姆介紹你的家規(guī)并向他展示一個(gè)溫情的中國(guó)家庭?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫(xiě)作材料。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。修改潤(rùn)色。初寫(xiě)短文。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語(yǔ)。要點(diǎn)提示：三條家規(guī)尊老愛(ài)幼，禮貌待人誠(chéng)實(shí)守信，不斷學(xué)習(xí)按時(shí)作息，杜絕熬夜你對(duì)你家家規(guī)的看法......簡(jiǎn)單闡述你是如何受益的......寫(xiě)作要求:，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文流暢、通順；；。10．俗話(huà)說(shuō)，國(guó)有國(guó)法，家有家規(guī)。提示詞語(yǔ)：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important提示問(wèn)題：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?Dear students, the World Reading Day is ing.