【正文】 立榜樣?！驹斀狻窟@是篇材料作文內容要點給的比較詳細，考生主要把所有要點表達清楚連貫就是篇不錯的短文；參考詞匯中，給了一些很好的詞匯，考生一定要把它們融合到作文里。方法理由看歷史劇情節(jié)有趣、通俗易懂；讀歷史書資料真實、引人深思；……（你的選擇）……（你的理由）要求：（1）詞數：80～100個。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。請用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他你的計劃是什么，你為什么這么做，并表達你渴望得到他建議的心情。高分亮點：短語：the plan for Father’s Day；some meaningful things；buy a beautiful card for him；give me some advice。你想成為志愿者。s easy for me to get along well with them.I have some plans for the of all，there are a lot of places of interest in Beijing，so I plan to take them to some places like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.I39。，第一層闡述自己申請的理由，介紹自己開朗的性格適合志愿者的工作；第二層詳細介紹給英國學生安排哪些周末活動；最后表明自己的期待。s easy for me to get along well with等介紹自己合適志愿者的工作；用動詞短語have some plans for、 介詞短語like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.、賓語從句I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in ，短語豐富，句型多樣。2. 文章要求語意通順，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范，不能出現真實的姓名、校名等信息。s easy for me to go around. 他們的公寓在悉尼市中心，所以對我來說，到處走走很容易。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談你是怎么做的，以及為什么這樣做。在寫作時,要根據提出的幾個問題為中心圍繞展開，再進行適當的延伸。句型：It is ＋adj. for sb. to do sth.；when引導的時間狀語從句。 【答案】Saving the EarthThe earth is our home. We should take care of it. But some things we have done are bad for the earth. We have polluted the earth and made it sick. We cut down too many trees and change rich land into desert. Many factories pour waste water into rivers and lakes. Pollution has caused some serious problems. For example, much of the land is poor, some rivers and lakes are dirty. Even the temperature of the earth is rising. The earth is crying for help.What shall we do to save it? My suggestions are that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories from pouring waste water directly into rivers. After all, we have only one earth. We should do everything we can to protect it, or we’ll be punished and lose our home.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文,動筆前首先要認真審題,弄清題意。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。使用了一些比較好的字句。同學們，請奉獻你的友善，為創(chuàng)建和諧社會做出貢獻。提示詞語:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society提示問題:What do you think of showing kindness to others?How do you help them kindly in your daily life?What do you dream about being kind to them?It39。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。根據要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談生活中你對他人提供善意幫助的經歷。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 讓文章更出彩。應用了較豐富的語言結構和詞匯，用詞準確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達清楚，具有較強的語言運用能力。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；結合材料內容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現在時態(tài)進行敘述。根據提示，以“Saving the Earth”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。文中采用first, second, finally表述自己的觀點，語言層次感很強，表達準確。s important for us to develop our good learning habits. I often do some things in my daily life：First, I get ready for new lessons before class. Second, I listen to the teachers carefully and take notes of the important points in every class. Third, I always finish my homework on time. At the same time, I do much reading every day. Finally, I work hard and turn to the teachers and classmates when I have difficulties.Only in this way can I learn better and improve myself faster.【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱式作文。 良好的學習習慣是成功的一半， 只有擁有了良好的學習習慣， 學習才能得到提高。Dear Sir/Madam,I’m glad to receive your and I have read it carefully. I have decided to live in ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m really looking forward to this study tour!Many thanks,Li Ming【答案】例文：Dear Sir/Madam,I’m glad to re