【正文】 ne plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進行“雙創(chuàng)”活動，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。根據(jù)這個內(nèi)容，寫作時，把短文分成兩個層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學生們發(fā)出號召，共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng)”活動中來。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句以及一些較復(fù)雜的高級句式，語句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic 。YesNoHelp us understand what we have learned；Practice makes prefect；...Take up too much time；Make us less interested in studying；...Your opinion：要求：1．80詞以上。s necessary for us to do daily homework.Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”．In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn39。寫作過程中要注意邏輯準確，注意正確使用連詞，借助實例、實際經(jīng)驗來佐證自己的觀點。最后可以用說理的方式來介紹做作業(yè)的必要性，例如用到了improve our skills提高我們的技能，在這里也有一點亮點，就是說作業(yè)也要有變化性，要豐富多彩，體現(xiàn)了作者的深度思考，總體來說出色地完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勆钪心阍撛趺醋?，以及這樣做的意義。句型：By doing so, our world will bee more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。例文點評：例文采用的是一段式，人稱用的是第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式，時態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述具體怎么做時，描寫細致，條理清晰。時代楷模充分體現(xiàn)“愛國、敬業(yè)、誠信、友善”的價值準則。其次，開始具體陳述觀點，陳述的時候要適當使用實例，相關(guān)用到的短語有have some difficulties in doing在做…的時候有困難，review the knowledge復(fù)習知識，think over the difficulties來回思考難點，Little by little一點一點地。s all. Thanks.【解析】寫作分析：審題之后能明白寫作任務(wù)是要寫出一篇小論文，討論每日的作業(yè)到底是不是必要的?！敬鸢浮緿ear students，I39。一直以來，同學們對作業(yè)持有不同的觀點。文章條理清晰，有層次。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，以常見的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫作的提綱。自雙創(chuàng)以來，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動，讓人點贊的文明行為隨處可見。用詞準確，語言得體，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達習慣。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了一個曾經(jīng)激勵過自己的人。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)入手，寫完整的句子。學生們可以這兩個問題為提綱，發(fā)揮想象力，充實細節(jié)信息，組織語言，連貫成文?！敬鸢浮縏he person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng. Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn39。7． “inspire” 一詞的漢語解釋是“激勵；鼓舞；賦予靈感；或啟發(fā)思考”等。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。（2）開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。根據(jù)下表提示,寫一篇英語短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時發(fā)表你自己對暑假安排的觀點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。d like to do，help me open my mind，at least，be interested in，during the holiday，plan to do，join in，be kind to someone in need，pay more attention to，be close to nature，search the Internet等。m interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, it39。3. 表達中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語向同學們匯報一下你的計劃。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestion…Dear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge becaus