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While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the ing holiday. That39。而First, I39。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如take place,in our hometown,in the past,used to be,go to do,on foot,by bike,better and better,more and more等。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。注意:。、校名等相關(guān)信息。寫作亮點:本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,要點齊全,語言簡練。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement(75%) popular form of entertainment, bring more fun people closer, make more friendsDisagreement(25%)spend too much time.not have enough munication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞:We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line搶紅包注意:(1)詞數(shù)80左右,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);(2)文章應(yīng)包括題中所提的所有要點,可適當發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫;(3)文中請勿提及你的真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell phones. What39。因此文章的內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要包括三部分:支持的人們的理由;反對者們的理由;自己的看法,可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述,這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,有層次。點睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。其次短文中語言得體,句式準確,符合英語的表達習慣。t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or illtempered ,even break their cell 。要點: 不重視課外閱讀的原因1. 作業(yè)太多2. 沒有讀書習慣3. 時間花在電腦或網(wǎng)絡(luò)上課外閱讀的好處1. 更多地了解世界2. 學會如何思考3. 生活更加豐富多彩對學?;蛲瑢W的建議……(至少一點)注意:1. 詞數(shù): 80個左右(開頭已給出的內(nèi)容不記入總詞數(shù));2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點,可適當發(fā)揮,但不要逐字翻譯;3. 條理清楚、語句連貫;4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。10.目前,許多中學生不重視課外閱讀。短文中使用了較豐富的句型,如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。文章分為三段,第一段是題目中已經(jīng)給出的,因此了文章的話題。為提升文章檔次,還應(yīng)注意使用高級句型和較復雜的句式。題目中給出了一個表格,里面包括了支持搶紅包這個游戲的人們的觀點以及反對這個游戲的人們的觀點和理由,只給了一些短語,我們需要組織語言,將這些要點用正確的英語表達出來,并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。9.書面表達(原創(chuàng))今年春節(jié),很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲,但也有人表示擔憂。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會用一般過去時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。,并補充相關(guān)信息,可適當發(fā)揮。8.書面表達難忘的初中三年學習生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲,你一定既有收獲又有不足,也有許多對自己未來的期待。s still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present ,豐富了習作內(nèi)容,使表達多樣,是本文的最大亮點。7.書面表達根據(jù)下列表格的提示,寫一篇題為Changes in Our Hometown的英語短文.(80詞左右)文章內(nèi)容必須包含所給的所有信息.開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù).內(nèi)容要點:過去現(xiàn)在1舊房1高樓2河水骯臟2河水清澈(clean and clear).3步行、騎自行車上班3乘公交車、小汽車上班4道路狹窄(narrow).4街道寬闊(wide),干凈整潔5居住條件(livings a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in ,既使短文層次清晰,又豐富了習作內(nèi)容,使表達多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如I39。s necessary for me to learn at least one skill. I39。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。6.書面表達同學們,中考后就會迎來漫長的暑假了,班會課上老師組織大家討論假期學習和生活計劃。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使語言表達多樣化,是本文的最大亮點。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore(而且), we are accustomed to (習慣于)queuing up (排隊) for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮點說明:這篇習作的層次清晰,內(nèi)容飽滿,表達流暢?!弊詣?chuàng)建文明城市文明鄉(xiāng)村以來,淄博人民萬眾一心,眾 志成城,讓人點贊的行為隨處可見?!军c睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。要點包括: 1. 變化是什么?2. 變化是如何發(fā)生的?3. 變化后有什么感受?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was a c