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型:Accordingly, I remend that some measures be , to solve the problem, some measures should be “七項基本原則”:一、長短句原則工作還得一張一馳呢,老讓讀者讀長句,累死人!寫一個短小精辟的句子,相反,卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主題:As a creature, I eat。as a man, I one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite ,長短句結合,抑揚頓挫,豈不爽哉?牢記!強烈建議:在文章第一段(開頭)用一長一短,且先長后短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個短句解釋主要意思,然后在闡述幾個要點的時候采用先短后長的句群形式,定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了。二、主題句原則國有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成“群龍無首”之感!相信各位讀過一些破爛文學,故意把主體隱藏在文章之內,結果造成我們稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句,放在文章的開頭(保險型)或者結尾,讓讀者一目了然,必會平安無事!特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險的!To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主題句).Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions 、一二三原則領導講話總是第一部分、第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分、第一點? 如此羅嗦??僧吘惯€是條理清楚??脊賯兛次恼乱脖厝灰ㄟ^這些關鍵性的“標簽”來判定你的文章是否結構清楚,條理自然。破解方法很簡單,只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了。1)first, second, third, last(不推薦,原因:俗)2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推薦,原因:俗)3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推薦,原因:俗)4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推薦,原因:俗)5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(強烈推薦)6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(強烈推薦)7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(強烈推薦)8)most important of all, moreover, finally 9)on the one hand, on the other hand(適用于兩點的情況)10)for one thing, for another thing(適用于兩點的情況)建議:不僅僅在寫作中注意,平時說話的時候也應該條理清楚!四、短語優(yōu)先原則寫作時,尤其是在考試時,如果使用短語,有兩個好處:其一、用短語會使文章增加亮點,如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單,看不到一個自己不認識的短語,必然會看你低一等。相反,如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點—精彩的短語,那么你的文章定會得高分了。其二、關鍵時刻思維短路,只有湊字數(shù),怎么辦?用短語是一個辦法!比如: I cannot bear :I cannot put up with want :I am looking forward to ,表達也更準確。五、多實少虛原則原因很簡單,寫文章還是應該寫一些實際的東西,不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實詞,少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個很好的時候,不應該之說nice這樣空洞的詞,應該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warmhearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。再比如:走出房間,general的詞是:walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房間應該說:slip out of the room 小姐走出房間應該說:sail out of the room 小孩走出房間應該說:dance out of the room 老人走出房間應該說:stagger out of the room 所以多用實詞,少用虛詞,文章將會大放異彩!四六級寫作“功能段落法” 示例:2012年6月六級真題作文背誦模板肯定不是最有效的方式,因為模板的思路是死的,是固定的。如果死背模板可能導致的結果就是所背誦模板的思路和考題思路不同,導致“所背非所考”。寫作第一步為審題。審題時,應把握試題對“體裁”和“話題”的宏觀要求;再關注“內容要求”:漢語提綱或英文提示兩種形式;最后關注字數(shù)。按寫作“內容要求”寫相應段落就是“功能段落”寫作的基本思路。按照“內容要求”:功能段落一般包含:現(xiàn)象、危害(弊)、原因、建議、觀點、意義(利)等六種形式?,F(xiàn)象段基本是每年四六級必考段落內容,如:下文圖畫本身就是一種現(xiàn)象,圖畫所反映的更是一種“現(xiàn)象”;圖畫的評論可以從利弊角度分析;最后發(fā)表觀點或建議。歷年四六級作文,無論是四級還是六級,無論是漢語提綱還是全英文命題作文,均可從功能段落角度突破:按題目要求去寫相應的內容和段落就永遠做到了切題。2012年6月六級真題回顧Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a position on the topic The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal are required to give a brief description of the cartoon and then ment on should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 :2012年6月份考到了較為少見的圖畫評論式作文,要求先對圖畫進行簡要描述,再對圖畫所描述現(xiàn)象進行評論。此次作文,內容方面上有兩項有求:圖畫描述+根據(jù)圖畫內容評論主題 針對該次作文,閱卷中發(fā)現(xiàn)跑題同學不在少數(shù),主要有以下幾種類型: 1)只見樹木,不見森林:即重點寫圖畫中的blog,而忽略了題目中Internet和interpersonal munication才是重點所在。2)重點偏題:即詳細闡述了internet對現(xiàn)代生活的影響,殊不知題目要求internet 的影響是局限在interpersonal munication上。3)題目要求對圖畫描述,但被考生忽略,或未能從interpersonal munication角度對圖畫要旨進行介紹。此類全英文命題形式在答題時考生可根據(jù)題目“內容要求”先自擬三個漢語提綱,然后再依照提綱去寫相應的“功能段落”,這樣全英文命題與傳統(tǒng)作文就沒有差異了。提綱如下::...:利弊 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication 首段:(圖畫描述:現(xiàn)象)Given is a cartoon which illustrates a rather interesting scene: the father, sitting in sofa, asks about his daughter39。s school life, with an expectation of talking with her。however, to his disappointment, the girl simply responds with a rejection: “You can read all about it on my blog.” 利弊段:分析網(wǎng)絡對人際交流的利弊This cartoon can be naturally associated with impacts of Internet on interpersonal munication.(圖畫聯(lián)系主題)On the one hand, Internet brings us great convenience and helps us to remove the obstacles of distance in is Internet that enables people in different places to keep in touch with each Internet, it is impossible for them to keep instant contact with others.(利)On the other hand, this phenomenon is particularly worth concern for the background that people, like the daughter in cartoon, may focus too much eyesight on Internet, totally turning a blind eye to facetoface worries many experts is that Interpersonal munication may be alienated and indifferent.(弊)現(xiàn)象總結+建議In contemporary society, it has bee a trend for people to municatevia , an increasing number of individuals deem it convenient, fast and fashionable to chat online.(現(xiàn)象)However, I am convinced that we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to spend more time talking or chatting face to face.(建議)Do bear in mind: Internet is merely a tool.(222 words)第二篇:四級常用句型一)比較 advantage far outweigh the advantages of A are much greater than those of may be preferable to B,but A suffers from the disadvantages that... is reasonable to maintain that...but it would be foolish to claim that... all the disadvantages,it has its pensating anything else,it has its and B has several points in bears some resemblances to ,the same is not applicable to and B differ in several ,it has both negative and positive used to think...,but things are different same is true of as A is,it has its is true that A...,but the chief faults are...二)原因 number of factors are accountable for this number of factors might contribute tothe answer to this problem involves many phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that... factors that contribute to this situation include... change in...largely results from the fact that... may blame...,but the real causes are... of the explanations for it is that...One of the most mon factorsis that...Another contributing factoris...Perhaps the primary factor is that … But the fundamental cause is that...三)后果 may give rise to a host of immediate result it produces is... will exercise a profound influence upon... consequence can be so great that...四)批駁1)It is true that...,but one vital point is being left )There is a grain of truth in these statements,but they ignore a more important )Some people say...,but it does not hold )Many of us have been under the illusion that...5)A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement )It makes no sense to argue for...7)Too much stress placed on...may lead to...8)S