【正文】 nesses, which needs to be encouraged. In my opinion, dividing subjects too early is not good for students39。 future development. For one thing, it is unnecessary to talk about this issue if the present system of examination isn39。t reformed, and for another the Ministry of Education had better take a careful attitude toward this problem. That’s all . 半開放式作文 Ⅱ 假如你們班在“珍愛生命，拒闖紅燈”的教育活動中，召開了一次主題班會。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文。 行人（ passerby）闖紅燈的危害 妨礙交通，影響車輛的正常行駛。 容易引發(fā)事故，危及他人和自身的生命安全。 ?? （自己設(shè)想） 對行人闖紅燈的處罰措施 批評教育，讓其認(rèn)識到闖紅燈的危害性。 當(dāng)場給予警告并罰款。 ?? （自己設(shè)想） 注意： ，注意行文連貫 。 ：亂穿馬路 jaywalk。 ： 120150。 一. 謀篇布局 ,擬定框架 首先 :引出話題 . 其次 :描述現(xiàn)狀及闖紅燈的危害 . 最后 :對闖紅燈的處罰措施及自己的看法 . 二 . 統(tǒng)籌時態(tài)、人稱 時態(tài)：引出話題用 “一過 ”， 其它的用 “一現(xiàn) ”。 人稱：第一人稱： we , I 。第三人稱： passersby, they。 三 .列出要點 : 1. 最近 ,我們班召開了一次主題班會 , 主題是 ”珍愛生命 ,拒闖紅燈 ”(引出話題 ) 2. 一些行人不遵守交通規(guī)則 ,經(jīng)學(xué)闖紅燈、亂穿馬路 .(描述現(xiàn)狀 ) 3. 亂穿馬路妨礙交通 , 影響車輛的正常行駛 .（ 危害 1） 4. 容易引發(fā)事故 ,危及他人及自身的安全 .（ 危害 2） 5. 為了處理這種情況，政府已采取了措施。 6. 批語教育亂穿馬路者，使其認(rèn)識到其危害。（措施 1） 7. 抓到闖紅燈或亂穿馬路者，當(dāng)場給予警告或罰款。（措施 2） 8. 我認(rèn)為，應(yīng)將闖紅燈者報告給其工作單位并把他們公諸于眾。（自己的看法） 9. 遵守交通規(guī)則，拒闖紅燈，我們應(yīng)從自身做起。（結(jié)束語） 四 . 推敲要點表達(dá)法 1. 最近 ,我們班召開了一次主題班會 , 主題是 ”珍愛生命 ,拒闖紅燈 ”. 召開了一次主題班會 , 主題是 ….: hold a class meeting with the theme of …/ hold a class meeting whose theme is… hold a class meeting named/titled… 珍愛生命 ,拒闖紅燈 : Love life , Don’t Jaywalk /No Jaywalking /Refuse Jaywalking 表達(dá) 1: Recently our class/we held a class meeting with the theme of “ Love Life , Refuse Jaywalking”. 表達(dá) 2: Recently we held a class meeting titled “Love Life , No Jaywalking”. 擴(kuò)展句 : We discussed the problem of passersby crossing the street while the traffic light is red . “ 2. 一些行人不遵守交通規(guī)則 ,經(jīng)常闖紅燈、亂穿馬路 . 行人 : passerby, 復(fù)數(shù) :passersby 遵守交通規(guī)則 : obey traffic rules 闖紅燈、亂穿馬路 : jaywalk / cross the street while the traffic light is red 表達(dá) 1: Some passersby don’t obey traffic rules and jaywalk frequently . 表達(dá) 2: Some passersby don’t obey traffic rules .They usually cross the street while the traffic light is red . 3. 亂穿馬路妨礙交通 , 影響車輛的正常行駛 . 亂穿馬路 :jaywalking (Ving作主語 ) 妨礙交通 :block traffic /導(dǎo)致交通堵塞 :result in traffic jam 影響車輛的正常行駛 : prevent cars from running smoothly/normally。 /affect cars’ normal running 表達(dá) 1: Jaywalking blocks traffic , which prevents cars from running smoothly. 表達(dá) 2:Jaywalking result s in /leads to traffic jam and affects cars’ normal running . 4. 容易引發(fā)事故 ,危及他人及自身的安全 . 引發(fā)事故 : cause/lead to /result in accidents to happen 危及 … 的安全 : endanger the safety of sb. / do harm to the safety of sb. 他人及自身 :指的是闖紅燈者自身及其他人 jaywalkers and other people , passersby and drivers , drivers and others 表達(dá) 1: It easily causes accidents to happen and endangers the safety of jaywalkers and other people.表達(dá) 2: It easily leads to accidents to happen and does harm to the safety of passersby and drivers themselves. 5. 為了處理這種情況，政府已采取了措施。 表達(dá) 1: In order to deal with this situation , the government has taken some measures . 表達(dá) 2: The government has taken some measures to solve this problem. 表達(dá) 3: Some measures have been taken to solve this problem. 6. 批評教育亂穿馬路者，使其認(rèn)識到其危害。 批評教育 : criticize and educate sb. 認(rèn)識到其危害 : realize/ bee aware of the dangers of doing so 表達(dá) : When caught jaywalking , the passersby are criticized and educated so that they will bee aware of the dangers of doing so . 7. 抓到闖紅燈或亂穿馬路者，當(dāng)場給予警告或罰款。 警告 : warn 罰款 : be fined 當(dāng)場 : on the spot 表達(dá) : Jaywalkers are warned and fined on the spot . 8. 我認(rèn)為，應(yīng)將闖紅燈者報告給其工作單位并把他們公諸于眾。 將 … 報告給 …: report sb. to … 工作單位 : work unit /pany 公諸于眾 : expose sb. to the public 表達(dá) 1: In my opinion, jaywalkers should be reported to their panies and exposed to the public . 表達(dá) 2: As far as I am concerned, the traffic police should report jaywalker to their work units and expose them to the public . ，拒闖紅燈，我們應(yīng)從自身做起。 從自身做起 : start from oneself 表達(dá) : As for obeying traffic rules and refusing jaywalking , we must start from ourselves. 五 . 連句成文 : 用過渡詞將每個要點串連成一篇通順的文章 . 【 模板展示 】 Recently we held a class meeting to discuss the problem of (討論的問題 ). As we can see, (這種事件的現(xiàn)實情況 ). (造成的結(jié)果 ). It is really a pity to see all this in our society. To deal with the situation, the government has taken some measures. (具體已經(jīng)采取了什么樣的措施 ). We should (你認(rèn)為還要怎么做 ). Recently our class held a class meeting with the theme of “ Love Life , Refuse Jaywalking”. We discussed the problem of passersby crossing the street while the traffic light is red . As we can see , some passersby don’t obey traffic rules and jaywalk frequently . Jaywalking blocks traffic , which prevents cars from running smoothly. Besides, it easily leads to accidents to happen and does harm to passersby and the drivers themselves. It is really a pity to see all this in our society. To deal with this situation, the government has taken some measures. When caught jaywalking, the passersby are criticized and educated so that they will realize the dangers of doing so, or they are warned and fined on the spot. In my opinion, jaywalkers should be reported to their panies and exposed to the public . In a word , as for obeying traffic rules and refusing jaywalking , we must start from ourselves. 【 佳篇品讀 】 Recently we held a class meeting to discuss the problem of passersby crossing the street while the traffic light is red. As we can see, some passersby don’t obey traffic rules and jaywalk frequently. This blocks traffic, seriously affects drivers and causes accidents to happen, endangering